When you use a colon to introduce a list, make sure to write a complete thought first. Your lead-in should be a complete thought.
So:
Wrong
Next year, we must increase crease our marketing in: the West, the Pacific Northwest, and the Southern regions.
Right
Next year, we must increase our marketing in three regions: the West, the Pacific Northwest, and the South.
Notice how the complete sentence does a much better job of helping the reader anticipate how the expression will end.
—Richard Lauchman, Punctuation at Work: Simple Principles for Achieving Clarity and Good Style
How to Use a Colon the Right Way
Posted by Jonathan Rick on Tuesday, September 04, 2018
Labels: Colons, Punctuation
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