Here’s a sentence I can’t believe I wrote this morning:
“The mindset of privileging the institution over the individual exemplifies an insidious form of insecurity.”
In rereading this, I immediately recognized how stilted it was, and so rewrote it as follows:
“When you value the institution over the individual, you betray your insecurity.”
The lesson? Write the way you speak, and embrace personal pronouns.
Practicing What I Preach
Posted by Jonathan Rick on Thursday, September 20, 2018
Labels: Bad Writing, Editing, Pronouns
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