Here’s a sentence I can’t believe I wrote this morning:
“The mindset of privileging the institution over the individual exemplifies an insidious form of insecurity.”
In rereading this, I immediately recognized how stilted it was, and so rewrote it as follows:
“When you value the institution over the individual, you betray your insecurity.”
The lesson? Write the way you speak, and embrace personal pronouns.
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Practicing What I Preach
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Jonathan Rick
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Thursday, September 20, 2018
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